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Ana Flooks
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

Concepts are fairly simple, should be easy to construct.

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Reviewer 2:

The room looks pretty easy to build. You have a gap in the walls which will be useful for sound isolation, which seems pretty critical in this room setup. Perhaps you could add some sound insulation material as well.

The room does seem kind of small. Is that by design?

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Reviewer 3:

Seems like an easy room to set up, which is great. Putting items in the middle of the room might be risky, however, as people might try to climb on them.

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Reviewer 4:

The room setup and telegraph both look straight forward to design since you can take many of the items off the shelf. The only truly custom items could be the translations and the circuit on the telegraph machine. If an old timey telegraph isn't for sale (or too expensive), it shouldn't be hard to make one.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The telegraph is good. The fact that the telegraph is a single texture makes the individual pieces in the first rendering a bit hard to see, but you have the other renderings to help with that.

The room setup is fairly clear, but you take out the back wall of the room in most of the pictures (except the first one, wherein it can only be seen a little through the front door of the room) to make it easier to see into the room. As a result, I don't know if you're putting anything on the back wall, or where exactly the back door is.

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Reviewer 2:

The rendering makes sense and gives me a clear understanding of what your construction should look like. Again, I wonder a bit about the scale-the room is very small relative to the size of the people and seems like it'd fill up with 5 or 6 people in it.

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Reviewer 3:

Nice renderings - very clear to understand.

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Reviewer 4:

The rendering looks very much like a museum display, capturing the aesthetics well. I like the incorporation of your telegraph CAD in the room. The telegraph CAD captures the feel of older versions you see in movies and should be intuitive to use.

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