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Emily Hsu
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Reviewer 1:

The aesthetic of the room is very simple and clean. It's almost like you've been transported to some cyber dimension trapped inside of a video game. I like the circuitry patterns on the walls. It might be cool to see a bit more detail on the buttons or possibly have the buttons glow when the virus is getting eliminated.

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Reviewer 2:

The aesthetics of the virus wall looks very good, and believable that it is some kind of cyber virus. Placing the people in the room also gave a better idea of the room play. The only thing I was unsure about is where are the lives located in the room. they seem like a central component of the game, and what the players are trying to protect, so it would make sense if they were at the center of the room displayed on some sort of table or screen on the floor.

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Reviewer 3:

Awesome job on the rendering!! I felt like i was transported inside the room and it gave me a good idea of how it would feel to play the game. I like the simplicity of the room design itself, and the color scheme fits the theme well. Overall, well done!

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Reviewer 4:

Great storyboard! The visuals are really strong and easy to follow.

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