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Erika Anderson
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

Simple and doable

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Reviewer 4:

N/A

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Reviewer 5:

Is only 1 picture (the translation book) needed for the puzzle? If the captions for all pics have morse code translations, you don't need the book.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

I believe I see what the storyboard is trying to convey. I remember from the last review that the more code decryption was going to be in a book of some sort, rather than just a list of the alphabet. That was interesting because it added a slight layer of complexity to the puzzle. Are you still doing that here, or just listing the code for each letter of the alphabet?

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Reviewer 3:

This is a good digital rendering of your original storyboard. As it currently is though, it doesn't read museum to me; it feels more control room. Maybe this is because of the color scheme is gray/blue/industrial vs. brown/old/grand. It is really hard to read some of the text in the panels too - especially the speech bubble in bottom row and the labels on the walls. Making it larger would help me understand the user experience a lot better.

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Reviewer 4:

By using 3D perspective view and digital view, the storyboard illustrates the overall layout of the room and the task required to be accomplished in the room in more details and clarity. Great job!

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Reviewer 5:

Story board is clear, colors are easily distinguishable. The people look very short because I assume the point of the triangle are their feet, not their pelvis. How big is the room?

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