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Gina Han
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

Have you done any testing with the motion sensors? These have a wide field of view and will need to be masked in order to work as intended. The wiring diagram is missing some components. The crank should be using a digital input for the reed switch.

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Reviewer 2:

Very well thought of design of the use the motion sensors. As mentioned, the prototyping motion sensors may not give a very robust result. I think you are already prepared for that. I think you can still make it robust enough using software, thats something that you can look into. Addition of multiple if-statements and constant testing of the design should do the trick

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Reviewer 3:

The circuit and sensor system seems pretty straightforward and feasible to implement. Looks like you already have the sensor chosen so, I hope it works out.

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Reviewer 4:

I think you did a good job with explaining the electronics. I think going with motion sensors instead of other options like pressure sensors was a good way to go because it minimizes the amount of sensors you need, simplifying the electronics. Your pseudo code did a good job of explaining implementation.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The drawings and renderings are easy to understand and pleasing to the eye. They communicate intent well.

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Reviewer 2:

Rendering is simple and easy to understand. I feel you are still trying to figure out the placement motion sensors in detail. You'll be able to only do this once you have built out the room. So good job so far!

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Reviewer 3:

The graphics explaining the concepts are very clear and visually impressive. I like you yhou used different colors and shapes to give some diagrams depth and a 3D effect. Overall this submission seems very complete and clean.

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