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Georgette Tso
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

The storyboard is clear, and I like the way you describe the experience.

I'm pretty concerned about the mechanism that moves the rope back and forth - but I think that comes later.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Reviewer 3:

The storyboard answered all my questions and explained what happened in the winning mode and in the multiple potential failure modes. I like the use of one-point perspective and appreciate that the entire storyboard was done digitally, making it cohesive and legible.

Just one question about gameplay that I was unsure of from the storyboard: does the wheel control the zipline throughout the room, or does it just control the beginning and the rest relies on players kicking off and bouncing?

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