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Haluk Akay
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

This room looks great! I would make sure that there is access to any required maintenance items under the floor.

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Reviewer 2:

The exploded view pictures were helpful but labeling would have made things more clear. I also would have appreciated a better idea of how the spaceship theme will be executed in the room.

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Reviewer 3:

It looks like you did a great job of incorporating feedback about potential safety risks for the room into your final design. I think the handle is a very smart design, and the recessed bowl for the tilt table makes a lot of sense (perhaps the edges of the bowl could also be padded?). I also think the handle design is quite clever and scales well for various numbers of players.

Framing the floor tight enough so that it does not feel flimsy is going to be important, but I don't think it should be too challenging.

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Reviewer 4:

The room assembly is well made and it is easy to discern the proportions of the different components. One thing that wasn't entirely clear was the base plate where the balancing stabilizer rests. I think it is, but just make sure the layers of board are flush so there are no tight spaces where someone's foot could get stuck if they fall off.

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Reviewer 5:

The model explains the function of the room very well. It explains how the spinner fits in the overall room setup and safety and utility requirements that go into the design. I especially like the exploded view of the room assembly that explains each layer of the room and how they coordinate with each other

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

Keep in mind there will be a monitor above the door, this may effect the "space" look. Overall this room looks very clean and easy to use. You may want to add railing or lighting for the stairs.

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Reviewer 3:

This is a simple but clean solid model. I think the room design is compact and the aesthetic works well for this concept. If it's not too expensive, some sort of pinpoint fiberglass lighting on the walls would contribute to a deep space feel and could contribute to an immersive room experience.

Although it's incidental to the design of your gag, I actually think stepping up into the room is a low-budget way of achieving the feel that 5Wits creates with its false elevators and diving bell; the deliberate action of stepping up to the 'command bridge' puts you in the story mindset.

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Reviewer 4:

Try to use photoview 360 add in in solidworks next time to render the assemblies into a more graphically accurate image, it will look nicer. The colors seem like good choices to have the only bright colors be on the task at hand.

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Reviewer 5:

Since the work is mainly used to explain the function of the whole assembly. The rendering technique used is simple and clear, good to illustrate the room design.

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