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Jeremy Hare
the great s cape

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Comments on function-related aspects

Reviewer 3:

I'm not exactly sure what 3D CAD you were working on, but I'm going to assume that it was the clear casing and tracks that the overhead crane moves on because other teammates worked on the renderings for the other components. Structural rigidity and durability are key factors in the design of the casing. Expect people to slam and rest against the panels. I don't see what size and thickness the supports or how everything is going to be fastened, but those are all important characteristics that need to be communicated. There also isn't any slots or attachments for the knobs or wheels that will be used to control the overhead crane.

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Reviewer 4:

I think that the cad looks well planned and thought out. I like that it is very clear how everything will fit together and function. I think that it would not be difficult to design and assembly these parts and like that they are all made of few things. I also like that you have thought about what materials you are going to make everything out of.

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Reviewer 5:

The theme is impressive and many details are taken into account.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The 3D rendering of the frame and core help to make the scale and size of this feel real. The rather goofy looking person model helps with this. The model does show some features that don't seem to be planned for though, such as glowing cores.

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Reviewer 2:

I'm not really sure exactly which parts you worked on, but overall the CAD looks pretty good. The rendering shows how all the parts fit together, but it'd be nice to have some sort of scale on the parts so I can get a rough idea how big everything is. I think the exploded view of what's inside the crane is great. I'd be interested to see how exactly you plan on implementing the electronics into everything, but from a form standpoint, everything looks well thought out to me.

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Reviewer 3:

Very simple structure that leads players to focus on the inside of the reactor. More detail can't be spent on the parts that the user interacts with like the wheels that move the crane.

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Reviewer 4:

I like the new storyboard and think that it looks very nice and easy to read. It is also very clear in communication the message. I like that you stuck with s simple color scheme and kept it consistent throughout the whole storyboard. This made things very clear and easy to comprehend and made it easy to follow things from one step to the next.

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Reviewer 5:

The design is intricate and user-friendly, with risks listed in a detailed and considered way.

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