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Jennifer Leung
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

Looks like a partial web page was submitted. I see section titles, but Lorem ipsum for the body text and a few broken image links.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Reviewer 4:

The sketches for the storyboard are very good, but it would be nice if they were a little bigger. Overall, the storyboard does a good job of conveying the key points of the room, and how to solve it. I think this would be a really fun room to solve.

Also, in order to move to a different part of the website you need to scroll all the way back to the top of the page, it would be nice if this wasn't necessary.

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Reviewer 5:

I like the drawings and descriptions! I think I understand your guys concept for the first time :P Very clear storyboard.

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