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Josh Graves
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

See comments for Ana Flooks (I accidentally commented on both the CAD work and the rendering for her).

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Reviewer 2:

It's very clear that some good thought and research has gone into creating or replicating this design, but I would like to know a bit more info than you have provided here. Were there additional considerations for use within this room specifically or for a game rather than a traditional use?

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Reviewer 3:

It is concise but it will be great to mark the parts in the drawings. I have no idea which one is the short bar, etc.

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Reviewer 4:

Your design seems well thought-out. I'd like some more detail about what the telegraph will be made out of, and how you'll machine it, but your cad seems well-developed for figuring that out.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

See comments for Ana Flooks (I accidentally commented on both the CAD work and the rendering for her).

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Reviewer 2:

I think here you could have provided a bit more "pizazz." I like the overall shape and basic rendering, but what would a fully-detailed model look like?Even something like changing the color of certain parts in the full view might help users queue into how to interact with this tool if they have not done so before. For this assignment it also might have been nice to try out some more professional-looking renders on top of examining the basic Solidworks imagery.

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Reviewer 3:

Not many details show considering human use factors. For example, the dimension of the device is not clearly shown so I am not sure whether the size is right for a user.

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Reviewer 4:

Pretty nice. For the room CAD, it would've been nice to have the textures and colors match that of the room rendering (pretty easy to do in SOlidworks appearances tab), but it's not a huge issue.

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