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Keval Babu
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

I'm glad to see that you switched the scrolls to digital. That was a very good decision! You could consider adding a painted crackle to the screens to make them appear to be made of paper.

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Reviewer 2:

Not much detail on the scroll mechanically... "The main idea behind using the digital scroll assembly is to make use of two 55" inch LED TVs and integrate it with scrolls to give the perspective of a real scroll."... So are the scrolls just spinning rods in front of the LED TV? Or the scrolls are completely stationary and just an image of an unrolling scroll on the LED TV?

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Reviewer 3:

Looks pretty good, it makes sense to use a digital method to display the patterns. Since the scroll is just a trim, I don't anticipate any major problems with its implementation. If the goal is to make the scrolls as realistic as possible, then using a TV may not be the best idea - something like a projector onto paper might work better.

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Reviewer 4:

The circuit diagram appears to be a good way to ensure resetting between each round. Also the placement of the scrolls is very clear in how they will work with the LED screens.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The camera is a nice touch. I suppose this could happen in any of the rooms. I am glad that you added it to your presentation. For the resetting of the jars, there is no need to randomize it. You are sensing the positions of the jars so you know where each one is when players leave a room. Program the digital content to display an image for the next group that requires them to move the most number of jars.

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Reviewer 2:

Wow the digital rendering of the room looks so great. At first glance I thought you guys decorated a real room. Theming is so on point. Looks like a game room I'd like to visit.

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Reviewer 3:

Looks pretty good from the renders. No interaction required, so the form just has to look the part (and it does). The camera can be better integrated into the room, especially if it's supposed to blend in. Perhaps you can hide it in the wall or inside a decorative object?

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Reviewer 4:

It appears that you have a good plan for moving forward. Making the scrolls appear authentic will improve the overall aesthetic of the room. Having the camera is also a nice touch in how the game will have a lasting effect on the players.

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