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Khanh Nguyen
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

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Reviewer 2:

The sketch of the room is purely aesthetic, but you do mention some functional details in the notes. I think it's really smart to limit the height of the "jelly bean" rocks. It might also be cool if the ledge disappears and goes in, forcing players to have to hold onto rocks (makes it physically harder).

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Reviewer 3:

The functions and user-experience aspects were taken well into account. The schematics provide a nice details in regards to the overall room theme details. Also, the relative placement of the object were also well-considered.

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Reviewer 4:

The room is overall functionally sound. I like the idea of having the white parts of the walls be the colored flashing lights.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

I really like the aesthetic and theming proposed here. I think this room could definitely pan out to make a great OpenWorld room.

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Reviewer 2:

The illustrated theme looks like it can be a room out of CandyLand.

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Reviewer 3:

The renderings are a bit too simplistic, some additional rendering techniques could be implemented to increase the aesthetic details of the drawings. However, the overall design schematics looks nice enough for successful implementation.

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Reviewer 4:

I would suggest putting more detail into the theming; I understand the concept and have an idea of what it will look like, but I think having a more detailed vision will help when you go to implement the room. Also, have you thought about having other colors of jelly beans painted on the walls to make the jars seem fuller? Only the 3 colors will have hand holds, but I think having more jelly beans would look nice.

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