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Kevin Schell
the great s cape

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Comments on function-related aspects

Reviewer 4:

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The illustrations and storyboards do a good job of defining the intended look and feel of the space. Well done!

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Reviewer 2:

The user experience is clearly depicted in the storyboard and the graphics are very clean and match the overall theme nicely. Well done! I like the room renderings because they show multiple perspectives and are very realistic. However, the room appears to be clean and new-looking, whereas the description suggests the plant should appear broken down and dangerous. It would be useful to see how these aspects will be visually incorporated into the room.

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Reviewer 3:

It was very nice to see that both your room design and storyboard were rendered using illustrator. There was significant detail in the renderings of both, for example the change in colors of the lights of the core. When I first looked at the storyboard, it was unclear to me that the core and control rods were placed in a glass box, so for future iterations, there could be a "room overview" section of the storyboard to aid the viewers. I agree with the fact that the control room should be as similar to real life as possible, but I am unsure if the glass box is your best solution. In real life, I don't think the control rods will be placed in the control room, so maybe if you had a separate "room" and a glass window that separated the control room and the fuel rods room, this would be more realistic. This will also make the challenge more difficult because the user can only see the core from the front, making depth perception difficult.

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Reviewer 4:

The use of electronic illustration has made this idea pop in my eyes. Overall these images are clear, the objects are well defined and recognizable. I would like to see more of the run-down aspect that is noted in the descriptions within the illustrations. This might be challenging due to the primary colors selected. Maybe returning to a grey/blue scheme would help in adding these details. I like the concept of dull colors for the non-essential components of the room, which therefore guide the team to the crane and the operation controls; however, beyond the monitors, this is not as clear as the description made it sound. I would double check the individual room components and make sure they are easily separable into an accessory and main component pile.

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