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Meghan Maupin
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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

The vault door is rendered very nicely here. I'm sorry that it doesn't have anything to do with the game!

The vacuum does not fit with the geometry of the room. It is in a different world space with different X, Y, and Z axes. That's unfortunate to see in a photorealistic rendering, especially given that this is your only image. I also noticed that the vacuum image appears on one of your teammates pages in the same orientation. It would have been nice if you had each used the same model to produce your individual deliverables, rather than exactly the same image.

The lockers came out well, and I appreciate the room layout view.

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Reviewer 2:

This is a beautiful rendering! I wish that we could see all the screens lit up as described in the storyboard- that would help convey the chaos of the room. It would also have been useful to have more description of the different things in the room and why they're important to include. The door looks really realistic- I wonder if it's feasible to do that with 2.5D theming- that'll be something to explore further.

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Reviewer 3:

The rendering is really nice! Very well done. The only thing that is a little confusing is the vacuum unit - it looks like it is floating as opposed to something that can roll across the floor. It would also be nice to describe a bit more about the user experience and why certain design features were chosen over others.

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Reviewer 4:

The render looks nice. A little confused about scale, though, both of the room as a whole (how high are the top boxes?) and of the vacuum. Can it be wheeled around to minimize distance to relevant boxes, or is it fixed with very long hoses? Are all the hoses of the same length (i.e. could they all be matched to any box), or are they varying lengths (could increase complexity)?

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Reviewer 5:

Big fan of the vault door! It looks legitimate impossible to break into. The vacuum, which is the primary part of the game, doesn't really fit with the rest of the scene. Also, the safety deposit boxes don't actually have the hose connections to hook the vacuum up to.

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