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Megan McCleneghan
scribbles n bits

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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

It's unclear what your contributions to the project are. Your link just says "view work" and links to the home page of the project.

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Reviewer 2:

N/A

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Reviewer 4:

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Comments on form-related aspects

Reviewer 2:

I think that overall the graphics of the steps showing how to paint the buildings so that they achieve the same texture/look as real buildings would have benefitted from some digital rendering. Because each step sort of changes the appearance of the buildings, it would have been easier to understand each step if it was shown how the appearance changed during that step. For example, if you painted the building glossy, I think that the buildings in the picture should have appeared glossier.

The room layout graphic was nice in terms of perspective, but I also think it could have benefitted from more shading/lighting to make it look more realistic.

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Reviewer 3:

The graphics were all very informative and helped a lot with understanding how the room and gag work.

Since you also worked on the html and css for the website submission, one thing to keep in mind moving forward is the ability for people to switch pages without scrolling all the way back to the top of the page.

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Reviewer 4:

Website is very clean, functional, and intuitive to navigate. The visuals make logical sense are are placed with thought. The website is aesthetically pleasing and clear. The only comment I have is that on the hope page, the letters saying "EARTHQUAKE" are spaced a little oddly; I can't tell if it's just the font or a typo.

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