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Rima Das
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

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Reviewer 2:

n/a

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Reviewer 4:

N/A

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

This is a great concept and is well presented. I really like this idea!

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Reviewer 2:

n/a!

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Reviewer 3:

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Reviewer 4:

The visual design of the room is well thought out, making it clear to the visitors that they need to not step on the floor. Timing however is not fully addressed. What happens after the 5 seconds elapse? Can they then step on the floor? If you can eliminate the timing aspect of your challenge, it would make for a much better experience. For instance, rather than having to complete the task in a certain time period, simply have the task remain active until completed.

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Reviewer 5:

I like the fact that your storyboard has moved up from a hand drawing! The room looks really great and I like how you picked a corner perspective. I love the striped walls, it really goes well with the candy theme. I think there are nice details you can to with the ledge to get a "candy shop shelf" effect.

The game looks really fun and I like the twist with the mixing colors- this makes the game harder, more engaging, and more rewarding.

I think the "reward" in the last frame of the storyboard- the rainbow effects, is important as it would really add to the whole experience.

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