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Sami Yamani
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

The doors for this room will open out (not in). This is necessary for the venue and to not hit your stairs!

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Reviewer 3:

I like the colors and textures of the walls and floors, it does make it seem more like a spaceship theme. I would probably not include the star wars items, as that would make the room seem like it is meant to be about star wars, and not a general spaceship theme. I think you should also move the windows to be lower, closer to the center of the wall rather than at the top. That way it would be easier to notice and feel more encompassing. I am not sure what the pictures on the wall are supposed to be, and if they are necessary. I don't think spaceships are typically decorated with frames, so I would leave those out and put bigger windows in their place.

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Reviewer 4:

Nice use of limited space. The game itself is quite compact and simple, should be easy to understand.

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Reviewer 5:

The room layout looks practical and well designed. I imagine the stabilizer base should be farther from any walls to prevent cheating (leaning against a wall might provide greater stability).

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

Previous descriptions talked about the room being black. In this page of your site shows the room to represent the inside of a spaceship. Where do you want your guests to feel like they are? Black is cheap and easier to build. The inside of a ship has a much cooler look and feel, but is harder to pull off.

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Reviewer 2:

The rendering of the room was very well done and it was clear that a lot of thought was put into it. I like the look of the room, though the decoration that goes into it should be more simplistic, spaceship-based decoration. Maybe just make the circular windows larger so they take up more of the wall. I don't think the smaller props, like the Star Wars models, are necessary. They seem to just clutter up the room.

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Reviewer 4:

The renderings could be larger but it looks like you've carefully decorated the space.

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Reviewer 5:

The aesthetics of the room layout are interesting. I'm wondering if the wall decorations and even texture could be more sympathetic to the exciting theme. Maybe fun lights and random control boxes on the walls would make it feel more like a spaceship.

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