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Uvini Lokuge
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Reviewer 2:

The illustrations and descriptions of the room ambience and wall tiles were presented very well. I could tell that a lot of thought was put into the different details of the room. I appreciate that the materials and composition of the room was listed alongside the sketches. Making the walls and tiles out of sandpaper was a clever way to recreate the archaeological effect of the site. Good job!

Because of the way the conductive paper is layered: Does this mean that players will have to touch the hieroglyphics themselves, not just the tile, in order to get the system to register that they've found the tile? Have you guys thought about using pressure sensors instead, or also making the rest of the tile conductive?

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Reviewer 3:

I think the form for this room will come together very nicely; this theme lends itself well to the 2.5D concept, and the rendering that you've made gives me a good feel for how you plan to execute the form of the room using that medium.

With respect to the execution of the actual image itself, I think it would read a little easier if you moved the right hand vanishing point further away from the center of the field of view. It's a little bit picky, but the perspective feels a bit distorted because of how foreshortened the left hand wall is.

The detail of the hieroglyphs around the room is great! I like how the picture on the wall relates to and enhances your main gag.

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