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Yan Yan
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Comments on function-related aspects

Client 1:

The function of this fairly simple subsystem is clearly explained.

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Reviewer 2:

The electrical implementation of the scoreboard looks good and shouldn't be too difficult to implement. The only question/ concern is what would the surface of the board be made of? I can image people hitting the scoreboard with the balls by accident (or not), and you'd want to ensure that the scoreboard is sturdy enough and the components won't be damaged.

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Reviewer 3:

How the scoreboard will function makes sense, well thought out. The size of the scoreboard in the rendering is quite large, will you be able to source LED lights to that scale?

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Reviewer 4:

The design renderings looks aesthetically nice and well-laid out. Also the implementation of the necessary electrical components was taken well in consideration.

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Reviewer 5:

I like the design of the scoreboard: it's functional and interesting-looking. The assembly CAD looks about right to me.

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Comments on form-related aspects

Client 1:

This looks like is quite achievable and will look pretty good!

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Reviewer 2:

I like the design of scoreboard and the colors of it. One suggestion would be maybe consider making the board a different shape (ex. a pantheon outline) to further emphasize the greek theme?

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Reviewer 3:

Rendering of the room gives a good idea of where and how the scoreboard fits into the experience.

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Reviewer 4:

The form is simplistic yet attractive. The rendering drawings are high quality and provide a nice detail to the forms of the design.

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Reviewer 5:

Great job rendering the room and scoreboard concept. I think you'd need more than a single neopixel strip if you wanted something to the size you showed in the room drawing. However, it's probably enough for a smaller scale room implementation.

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