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 Decode the alien ship's message!Presentation
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Decode the alien ship's message! storyboard comments

Reviewer 1:

Interesting concept!

Would the sounds from the floor tiles only happen once you're listened to the message?

Would the tiles have to be pressed in a certain order?

Having the door open automatically once you decode the message would definitely bring a "wow" factor (just make sure no one is leaning on it and falls backwards!).

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Client 2:

I love the idea of the octagonal floor pieces, and glowing along the edges - this would have a very strong visual appeal.

The plan for mounting and laying down the joists for the floor is well thought-out.

How would the show determine the group size?

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Client 3:

Great concept -- I love the cooperative element, the "figure out what to do" element, and the challenge of translating/mapping of the audio cues to physical tiles.

Very neat idea here.

The flooring would have to be thin and extremely durable.

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Overall storyboard clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

Super clean.

Everything is very clear.

The commentary below each picture helps the reader become engaged in the storyboard.

Good job!

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Client 2:

Very well thought-out and thorough.

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Client 3:

Very clear drawings -- excellent walk-through of gameplay.

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