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Ayantu Regassa
The Dark Team
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time selection device concept sketch comments

Reviewer 1:

i could not find his sketches

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Reviewer 4:

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Client 5:

Time travel is a very popular theme and something that everyone has always dreamed of doing.

With that said, if you give the user a choice between 2 time periods, you are going to have to create almost 2 variations of show (twice as much audio, programming, etc).

That is a lot of work!

I would also recommend that you make everything as clear as possible.

We have guests that are 7 years old and up so make sure everything is very easy to understand!

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destination display concept sketch comments

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Client 5:

I really wish there were more details here.

A drawing of a control panel with lots of button and switches is really cool, but what do they do?

Do they light up?

Can you push the buttons?

Do they do anything?

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exit door concept sketch comments

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Client 5:

I would be awesome to have more details on this.

A futuristic door could look so cool!

How does it open?

How does it work?

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Overall concept sketch clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

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Client 2:

I could not view your images... the website appears to not be functioning?

I've checked in a couple different browsers... all other teams appear to be functioning but I can't see yours.

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Reviewer 3:

Not uploaded at 6:45pm, Sunday the 23rd.

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Reviewer 4:

Unfortunately there were no sketches available for review. I did see the main team site and although not completed it did look like it was headed in the right direction to give a clear presentation.

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Client 5:

I really, really wish there were more details in this presentation.

I think this group has a lot of cool ideas, but unfortunately they were not communicated very clearly.

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