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Daivon Deans
The Dark Team
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time selection device concept sketch comments

Reviewer 1:

I was unable to review this site or sketches as both the team storyboard site and the individual team member sites appeared to be disconnected and lacking images.

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Client 2:

Your first image is not showing up on the web-- broken link?

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Reviewer 3:

The image is missing.

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Reviewer 4:

1. The sketches represent loose storyboard concepts, but include little detail. It is simply not clear what the idea is. It would help to elaborate on the 'gag' used in the idea.

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destination display concept sketch comments

Reviewer 1:

I was unable to review this site or sketches as both the team storyboard site and the individual team member sites appeared to be disconnected and lacking images.

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Client 2:

I can see this image, though it is too small to read.

It looks like a sketch of a round floor with some kind of podium in the center and a flying saucer on a screen.

Wish it was more clear.

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Reviewer 3:

I'm not really clear on what is going on in this picture.

I do like that there seem to be several people playing the game, so it's good that it accommodates multiple players.

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Reviewer 4:

1. There seem to only one sketch for concept-1 and concept-2. The idea is just not clear - please elaborate.

2. The destination is shown as a spaceship approaching a planet. Implementation and user experience need to be developed further, until which, a comment on feasibility cannot be made.

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exit door concept sketch comments

Reviewer 1:

I was unable to review this site or sketches as both the team storyboard site and the individual team member sites appeared to be disconnected and lacking images.

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Client 2:

Again, a bit small to make out -- even trying to blow up the image in Chrome.

It appears to be a door... looking forward to seeing more next time.

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Reviewer 3:

This is certainly a feasible idea, but it's not especially innovative.

Maybe you could decorate it to be more sci fi than just ordinary sliding doors?

(For instance, if you do an online search of sci fi doors, a lot of them are in fact just ordinary sliding doors, but they tend to have cool features like glowing lights and stuff like that).

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Reviewer 4:

1. The sketch suggests that the doors slide horizontally to open and let the participants through. Implementation seems straight forward.

2. A suggestion is to add sound/visual effects to enhance the user experience.

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Overall concept sketch clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

I was unable to review this site or sketches as both the team storyboard site and the individual team member sites appeared to be disconnected and lacking images.

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Client 2:

Clearly having problems with the web presentation.

But the first three people in this team had nothing working at all, so this is incrementally better!

Make sure to double check how your work appears on line after submitting it!

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Reviewer 3:

Presentation really matters, people believe your ideas more

one of the images is missing and the other is rotated on its side.

Additionally, the images are unclear and confusing, and the text is too small to really make out what is happening.

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Reviewer 4:

1. Website redirection did not work accurately - all the links need to be tested to make sure that a user does not meet a dead end.

2. The sketches only provided loose storyboard ideas without any supporting information to explain them. It is suggested that the ideas be further developed and a lot more detail to the concept be displayed and explained.

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