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Repairing a robot ally storyboard comments

Reviewer 1:

This seems like a fun, sci-fi idea. I would be concerned with the sequence of events not being intuitive to the users. It might take a while before they put all of the steps together and understand the goal. That being said, I do like the complexity and multi-step nature. If you properly cue the users, I think that the multiple stes will keep people involved and interested.

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Client 2:

Angela:

Great ideas, and very clearly explained.

You all clearly took the advice and the requirements of the project to heart.

The ideas are all very detailed.

- The magnetic solenoid would be interesting to see in action.

Getting the right voltage balance will be the trick here.

- The puzzle piece retraction system looks great - this could all be built very robustly.

I like the whole idea very much.

Arash: - How would all this reset between groups?

Also, does the magnet roam around the whole room?

Audrey:

Interesting!

I'd like to see how the magnets disengaging makes the pegs fall out of the holes - I think in some cases (the lower calf, as you've drawn it) it might just stay put.

Joey:

-Love the spinning sections idea - especially that they don't rotate independently of each-other.

-For the lever/button robot game, where do the groups see the instructions?

- Ok, yeah, I laughed at the 'tired of drawing robots' line. :P I like them moving the floor tiles around - that could be very neat.

How would they move them?

In troughs in the ground?

If so, is it a trip hazard?

Cool idea though!

Julia: Not bad - would be very simple to produce as we build touch sensors.

I like.

Simple, straight-forward.

Tara:

Neat puzzle idea!

I could see this being very interesting.

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Client 3:

This is a neat, two stage puzzle -- I think this could be a great game in the adventure experience, it has all the key features.

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Overall storyboard clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

The drawings are very pretty and clear. The captions on the side are easy to understand and give

good overall idea of the storyline and user experience. I think that the simple format was also nice. It is very easy to just scroll down and look at each panel. I also liked the use of color in the pictures.

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Client 2:

Well done!

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Client 3:

Beautifully drawn, clear and articulate, one of the best.

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