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Arash Kani
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 Ceiling Mounted Electromagnet and JoystickRobot TombAssembled RobotPresentation
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Overall concept sketch clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

Your team's website looks very nice. The design is clean, aesthetically pleasing and easy to navigate but the descriptions of the sketches are confusing. The concept sketches look very good and express the ideas clearly.

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Reviewer 2:

The shading and form are good, but it would be clearer to have some arrows or highlights to certain parts of the piece, e.g. the robot or the button on the joystick, to line it up with the textual descriptions more easily. (Some of the perspective on the robot tomb seems off, but it must be very hard to get it right on a tapered cylindrical thing like that.)

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Client 3:

The drawings are really great, and the descriptions are helpful.

Zoom out one more level and make sure the description you provide and the drawings that supplement it actually describe the entire idea, so a viewer knows what the actual guest experience is, even more importantly than what the physical props/elements are.

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Reviewer 4:

Very good sketching! Nice presentation of the concepts.

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