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 Rescuing the mothershipPresentation
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Rescuing the mothership storyboard comments

Reviewer 1:

I think that the story line is very exciting. It presents the opportunity for a lot of cool effect, visuals, and interactive puzzles. I do like the teamwork aspects and it will be very easy to reset the room.

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Client 2:

This game looks like it could be a lot of fun, especially for big groups.

I would recommend that you provide clear feedback for when a guest interacts with the show (pushes a button, moves a lever, etc.).

With so much going on at once, it can be very confusing for the player to know that "they did that".

To help the user understand I would add as much audio and visual feedback as possible!

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Client 3:

Some neat concepts here -- selling the idea of a space battle would be challenging... and awesome if you can pull it off!

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Overall storyboard clarity and presentation

Reviewer 1:

The storyboard was quite clear. I like the comic book style where there were captions and dialogue. They also gave good visuals for what was happening. The website presentation was also nice. The rocket ship arrows were cute.

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Client 2:

The storyboard was overall clear, but I would have like to see more details.

What is the actual game?

How do guests know what to do and when?

Is the game play about getting the exact timing right, or is it hitting buttons in a correct order, etc.

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Client 3:

Very nice work, I like the B+W motif, a very nice storyboard.

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