- The
Great Cheese Hunt
Totally, I like this simple and friendly story and I
think it is very familiar with kids.
There are a couple of points to cliticize design.
Navigation
It is a little difficult to recognize where I am in the
subway map. One of the solution is providing another
window to show whole map always.
Goal
should be emphasised more using different colors from
other pages.
Interaction
Because a mouse navigates from one station to another
instead of Web users (kids), the mouse should be more
attractive. For instance, mouse might appear in the
station guide photos. Also the mouse can interact with
some objects like croissant in Au Bon Pain or chinese
food in Chinatown.
- A
Tale of Two Frums
This story is also simple and I like it. Compared with
"The Great Cheese Hunt", this story's camera control
depends on user's view point. We don't have any
substitutional charactor of us.
Each door icon is a little confusing me because its
open/close representation is not concerned with next
situation. If I distinguish each door, I use door's
color, shape or size.
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