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By Marisa Pjerrou

The official website of the national, non-profit SHiNE organization, shine.com is aimed at 12-24 year olds who "care about the world and want to make positive differences." Founded by Alan Rambam, a former whiz in youth marketing and advertising and one of the country's "foremost experts on cause branding" (whatever that is), the somewhat broad goals of the organization are to help "young people develop the tools they need to build self-esteem, embrace diversity, promote social harmony and practice non-violence." Kids can get involved through participation in SHiNE mall events, teen town halls, and nationwide SHiNE clubs. The shine.com website attempts to convey SHiNE's goals by providing "teens with information on relevant social and political issues, entertainment and pop culture news, and a w! ealth of resources to help them mobilize for change." Not an educational site in the strictest sense, shine.com has more of an after-school club feel to it where teens can "discover each other, share their views, and talk about their lives." Rambam's middle-of -the-road kind of focus plays it safe in attracting big corporate sponsors such as Tommy Hilfiger, Kodak, Procter & Gamble, and AT&T Wireless, and either ignores or obfuscates controversial subjects. While the site's discussion board and advice column clearly shows that many of shine.com's fans are concerned with relationship and sex questions, there is no mention of safe sex or birth control use anywhere. Also, while SHiNE managed to land a gig at the White House as the "lead youth partner" in the National Campaign Against Youth Violen! ce, there were surprisingly no articles on subjects such as rape or teen gangs.

For an organization that seems committed to social/activist causes, the inclusion of celebrity news doesn't make sense and actually detracts from what SHiNE seems to want to represent. The most dominant visual element of the home page was a photo and accompanying blurb about Drew Barrymore and Tom Green's recent house fire. If the purpose of including celebrity news is to create stronger appeal to the 12-24 year old crowd, it would at least make more sense to align tidbits of celebrity info with SHiNE's themes of diversity, social harmony, etc. and not just with random information. Why not focus on Drew Barrymore's vegetarianism, for example? Another annoying focus on celebrities were two separate lists I found of celebrity endorsers, but with no expl! anation as to why they were chosen to endorse SHiNE, or what their backgrounds were. In one of the lists, by selecting a name, a scanned image of an autograph and an insipid message would appear from the famous individual. Cindy Crawford's contribution: "Only you know what's right for you. Trust your instincts - that's what they're there for!"

As a forum for allowing teens to express their views, the discussion board section offers nothing new or innovative that one can't find at other discussion boards. An odd advice column called "Ask Maxine" was full of sex and dating concerns from teens with responses from Maxine, the SHiNE cartoon spokeswoman; I found the lack of an actual psychologist's visible presence for this column to be somewhat disturbing. Who is Maxine? A college intern? A SHiNE computer programmer? The best features of the site were a section called Action (where one can find out about local volunteering opportunities) and the stories about young people who exemplify the SHiNE ethos in some unique way: for example, a young man who started his own urban-style clothing design firm, or a young woman who is a plus-size model. The problem I had with these features, especially with the interesting articles, is that they were "buried" within a wide array of confusing topics with titles such as "inspiration" or "real life." I was surprised to find under the Action section MTV's very socially powerful and well-designed hate crime website, Fight for Your Rights - and even more surprised to discover that it was a co-production of MTV and SHiNE. How Drew Barrymore and Tom Green get placed on the homepage while this link got demoted to another is unbelievable, considering how well it exemplifies and teaches what SHiNE seems to be about.

I personally didn't like the "raw" style art design of the website, nor the accompanying unattractive cartoon spokespeople - although they do give the site an urban, youthful look. The navigation definitely distracts from the site's intentions: I say dump the celebrity feature of SHiNE and organize the real teen stories better so that they are easier to find and more prominently displayed on the front page. Also clean up and clarify some of the links. The reasons for including a link to Canada were unclear to me. While I would recommend putting the MTV Fight for Your Rights link right on the homepage, I wonder if that middle-of-the-road focus that attracts big corporate sponsors and well-known celebrity end! orsers wants to keep the homepage controversy-free? (Hence put the "hotter" issues on another page?) It would also be nice to see more extensive coverage and photos of the nationwide SHiNE teen clubs than what if offered in the SHiNE 411 section.