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http://www.technoteen.studentcenter.org

By Max Van Kleek

"By Students, and FOR the students", shouts the About page of technoteen.studentcenter.org. This web site, part of the larger Student Center Network at www.studentcenter.org, tries to serve as a portal to everything an American teenager would want; a chat service, online games, a matchmaking service, forums for advice, jokes, sports, poetry, movie and music reviews, and links to external resources for advice on everything from homework to health. This site is not small-scale; it features 40 sections linking off the mainpage, and hosts a a registered user base of over 5,000 and a daily hit rate of several hundred users per day. Yet despite the tremendous user base, and the potentially tremendous influence this site might have on American teenagers, there is not much intellectually stimulating content; instead, there are endless resources on stereotypical teen issues, chat and advice forums.

By being made by teens and for teens, the site guarantees to its audience that it will portray only teen viewpoints, and address only teen interests. This site accomplishes the former well; its numerous open, uncensored, unmoderated forums are bustling with contributions and social activity. Unfortunately, though, in selecting topics for features on the site, it seems to reach only the "least common denominator" of teens' interests, rather than diversifying to a variety of user interests, or trying to introduce teens to topics or interests. As a result, the site is overly concentrated on "teen themes", such as dating, sexuality, idols, gaming, and making "cyberpals", but not much of anything else.

An exception are two of the most interesting parts of the site that involve creative, personal expression: "Teen Diary" and "Teen Poetry". The former allows users to pseudonymously enter personal thoughts or problems that they wish to share with the teen community. Each diary entry is accompanied with an uploadable image, and a face indicating the writer's mood. While technically not very different from a from a newsgroup-format, the diary-metaphor seems to effectively encourage people to open up their lives to the readers, who then act as counselors or critics. Even more rich is the "Teen Poetry" section, where many users submit their composed poetic pieces to a public bulletin board. The quality of the submitted material is frequently higher than anything else on the site, since most of the entries are actually in verse or composed offline, and are less "chatty" than the diary entries. It is a pity that more of the site is not of this quality.

Overall, the greatest weakness with the site is the lack of intellectually or aesthetically stimulating, motivating, or entertaining content. First, there are no interesting challenges, questions, or facts that pique readers' curiosity. The "quizzes" and "questions of the day" are irrelevant wastes of time. What is also interesting is that for being a Teen hangout, the visual appearance of the whole site is surprisingly humble -- not particularly cool. Most of the forums -- except the diary and poetry ones discussed above --, are unmoderated and fall into unfantastic conversations and many spiral into mindless chat. At its current level, it is difficult to imagine that any of the users would get anything out of most of the features of the service, besides the passing companionship