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By Jessica N. Bowles-Martinez

I picked this site because the URL caught my attention for some reason. Perhaps it was the ambiguity in how I should parse it into words, was it "to bi-girl" or "tobi girl" or something else I'd never considered. Once I went to the site it was suddenly obvious why the URL grabbed my attention. I knew this girl. She lives with one of my friends and his wife in Cambridge and I had been to her apartment many times.

First off, I have to say that this is rather strange. I have gone to other people's personal sites and never really felt like I was violating their privacy or being nosey, but now that I actually sort of know the person, its feels very different. I feel like I was just handed a variety of ways that I can spy on her. It feels almost deceptive and malicious.

First there is her journal, which is hosted by a site called LiveJournal.com. Live journal is a place where you write whatever you want, and you can leave information like your current mood, music, etc. What I thought was the best part is that after every entry Tobi writes, LiveJournal lets other people leave comments and what was said. Also, there is a list of her other friends who also use live journal and recent things they wrote are next to their pictures. Its sort of creepy to look through because I know nearly everyone that I see commenting on the entries, and then I find their journals linked to the comments.

Looking through the journals it seems that no one holds back, and everybody is extremely emotional and opinionated. Using the calendar option I went to journal entries that I knew were on dates of parties at Tobi's house and was able to look at her entries as well as her, and my, friend's entries on that day. From there I read how one girl I knew was angry at her boyfriend because of some silly stuff he did that night, and how there was strain and stress in the relationship. Another person talked about how much fun they had at the party while others gossiped about the other party goes. I felt like I was given some sort of ability to look into their heads, to know more than what anyone would have wanted. Perhaps next time I spend time around this group I will feel uncomfortable, as I don't think I will be able to help myself from imagining what sorts of judgments and concerns lay behind their smiles.

I went through the FAQ area of the site next, and got some of the basic cut and dry information that never really came up in the brief conversations that I had with her. Before I came to this site and really looked around it I didn't really know very much about this girl, she was just sort of in the background when I was around her. Next time I see her will be a very different experience, because I've read enough to know how she thinks, as well as the facts about her. Going to personal sites of people I vaguely know is always awkward later when I run into the person whose site I saw later. I feel like I know a lot about them, but they know almost nothing about me. Later when they tell me about them, I often already know the information but I don't want to tell let on that I know. Even though their information is on the internet from experience I've found that admitting that you have read their site and remember information on it always creeps the other person out. I wonder if that's because they only expect people they know well to go to the site, but if that is the case then why do they include the basic information that would not be necessary for established friends.

I have had quite a few friends who have either lost jobs, friends, or had other consequences because people have been upset with what they wrote on their page. I find myself being very weary of posting too much personal information for these reasons. Often I wonder who the intended audience is for these journals. Some of my friends request that people who know them personally not read the site for fear of offending them. Others ask that only people who know them read their entries. Yet, most don't even consider who their audience is at all. There are consequences to letting so much be accessible, either in the harmless social way were there is an uneven distribution of information all the way to the dangerous possibilities of stalkers.