Comment

Smith: Comment: 5 paragraphs in length. Paragraph 1: identifies type of device to be designed and built. Paragraph 2: where device will be tested and how. Paragraph 3: discusses LDC's and foil addition for gathering test data. Paragraph 4: further elaboration of test methods. Paragraph 5: semester breakdown of project.

Style: no personal pronouns. Vague discussion of research in approach section. No formal conclusion is necessary here: this is signaled by list of references at end of document (if included).

ebarrett@mit.edu

schiu@mit.edu