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Writing Guidelines

useful headings
headings2
first few words
active voice
set the context
use lists
imperatives
• parallelisms
simpler words
• fragments
• descriptive links
combine guidelines







Writing for the Web:

Try fragments

Space is always at a premium.

  • Complete sentences are not always necessary.
  • Distinguish between:
    • fragments - coherent phrases
    • telegraphic writing - leaving out words like "a" and "the"
  • Telegraphic writing may be OK in navigation, but avoid it in text. It doesn't save time because the user has to mentally put the little words back in.
Fragments - yes:

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Telegraphic writing - no:

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