Summary
The wise writer varies sentence structure and length to keep the reader's interest.

Sentence Variety and Transitions

If you followed my advice, you are now writing short, active-voice sentences. That's good. What's bad is that you can end up with pretty bland prose. For example:

 

No Variety

Upside Every sentence is short and descriptive, active voice.
Downside Weak sentence variety. Every sentence has same subject (Bonds) and same verb (hit). Gets boring quickly.
Digression In a speech, repetition can be quite powerful.

 

 

To enhance sentence variety, do the following:

 

Variety

 

Variety

Transitions

Good writers focus on transitions. Common transition terms include the following:

Without Transitions With Transitions
The C compiler can process 1,000 lines of code per second. The rate is slower when the host is fully loaded." The C compiler can process 1,000 lines of code per second. However, the rate is slower when the host is fully loaded.
Commercial airplanes can cruise at altitudes up to 12 miles. The Concorde cruises at 60,000 feet. The Boeing 747 cruises at 39,000 feet. Commercial airplanes can cruise at altitudes up to 12 miles. For example, the Concorde cruises at 60,000 feet. However, the Boeing 747 cruises at only 39,000 feet.

Transition No-Nos

It is tempting to start a sentence with "But" or "And." But don't do it in technical writing. And here's why: "but" and "and" are conjunctions, great for intrasentence transitions but not appropriate for intersentence transitions.