Date:         Wed, 21 May 1997 06:32:49 PDT
From: Charack Bane <charack@HOTMAIL.COM>
Subject:      Okay, I'm new and I'm saying "Hi"

Okay so I was told I messed up, by not introducing myself before I
submitted to the list. Opps, sorry about that. I wasn't trying to be
all superior or shit. I just didn't think it was important and have
never done it before. So here's a bit about me.
  I was born at a military base and have been on the move since. I
haven't spent longer than six years in any one place, and ussually a
lot less. I am currently living in Seoul, Korea. I went to CWRU in
Cleveland Ohio. I've been writing poetry for about eight years on and
off. I don't know if I'm any good at it i just write it for myself,
and let others take from it what they will. I also draw and paint as
well as teach. If you want to reach me just drop me a line, I love
mail and always write back. Oh and just so this isn't a waste of time
for you here is a poem. C$C welcome.

Badge
"Get Up!" her voice said
sharp and cold, the knife.
In a heated panic I rise.
Stark
  naked
    rigid, with fear.
      I am taken
        in, used.
          left
            alone.

Later, much later, her voice
from another mouth sayes
"It didn't happen."
It couldn't happen.
I couldn't happen.
But It could.
It did.
I happened.

Charack 6-11-97
as always please give me any insight you might have as to how I could
make this poem more.

Thanks



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