I liked how you included a nice visual of the different types of bras. The captions helped to explain the shape and function of each one. The video was great at explaining a lot of things, but I would have preferred a walkthrough of your experience in selecting bras. I also think some user interview quotes could help give some context as to the concerns of bras mentioned in your analysis. I think your solutions to the problems are great, but wish you expanded more on trying to ease the search process.

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I think you did a very good job covering the background of bras. The image of the different types and the video was very helpful in establishing what the problem with them really is.

I was interested in learning more about the fitting process first hand. Quotes or discussions with users would have been helpful. Also, talking to people at stores who help with bras fittings could be interesting, maybe they have a slightly different perspective than the customers themselves.

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You specify concerns within your analysis of the bra along with giving each concern a score, however, the scale is not identified and the score has no clear value. Using a video to show the process is a good idea for giving an in-depth view, in addition, I think accompanying the video with a list of the crucial steps for quick reference would also help for a refresher for people coming to the site again, instead of watching the video again. Within the analysis, there was a large emphasis on what was wrong with the product and the process, another section pointing towards the positive things that the product provides and the process would also be enlightening even if it was a small list.

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Your presentation of your analysis was straightforward and clear. I was a bit unclear as to the concerns and what the score meant in the table. Perhaps an explanation on the score would clear some confusion. I also think a navigation bar at the top for 'introduction,' 'process,' etc. would help readers navigate your page more easily. Other than that, nice job.

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The presentation is very clear and concise. It is easy to navigate this site. However, splitting up the discussion into different sections on different pages would make it more clear. It was hard to tell what was being discussed at different points throughout.

Another thing to be careful of are how symbols show up on the site. There are a couple places where there are weird symbols which I would think are a mis interpretation of what you intended.

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There is slight confusion on whether you are analyzing the process of choosing a bra or the bra components in general. In my opinion, the addition of a cartoon in your analysis takes away from the formality of your analysis. Addition of quotes to your analysis would support concerns better.

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