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Feedback on the concept explored by the sketch model

Client 1:

The visual of the fuse could be cool. Does it look realistic or is it suppose to be conceptual? As for the switches, do more switches makes this game better or worse? What value is there to adding discrete positions of the switch? This game probably requires lots of playtesting, especially with the dials. Good luck!

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Reviewer 2:

I'm sorry but I really don't understand how the model relates the storyboard. I don't remember enough details from the presentation to relate make an educated assessment. This appears to be an older storyboard that hasn't been updated.

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Reviewer 3:

It took me a few minutes to understand what exactly I was supposed to be looking at, and what I would be doing (in theory). Once I understood that the user is making combinations of the inputs, it made sense, but this was not immediately clear.

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Reviewer 4:

Is the dial + table the same thing that's supposed to be the cubes in the storyboard ? If so, how do the guests combine light?

One thing that immediately came to mind with the table is gameplay for multiple users -- if there are more // less people, will it be much much easier or much much harder ?

I like how you've indicated marks on the dial. It seems like you were trying to explore size of the table and the size seems, well, pretty sizable.

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Feedback on the execution of the sketch model

Client 1:

Sorry guys, but this was a tough concept to understand. The storyboard was not updated. The website says "chamber" and the review says "platform". The font was very hard to read. This was a tough concept to digest the details.

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Reviewer 2:

Apologies, but I just don't understand the model so I cannot comment on its execution.

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Reviewer 3:

The visual is very interesting. I am not certain this is the best setup for the execution of the game, but I can see the strategy. In the story board, it seemed like there were more individual stations that people could stand at. I do like that this model requires the coordination of multiple players.

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Reviewer 4:

good ! Did an effective job exploring size + placement.

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