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Feedback on the concept explored by the sketch model

Client 1:

I think the concept is pretty funny, and the right amount of cartoon like to make it sell.

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Client 2:

Matt and I both fell in love with your giant fat sheriff. Very funny, very fun - I love the tongue-in-cheek design! Absolutely wonderful.

I took a photo of it and shared it with the staff here, as we all knew you were going to build one of those guys anyway. ;)

I could see this guy built out of painted and routed MDF layers quite easily.

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Reviewer 3:

Maybe exploring some other designs for how to fit yoga balls into the room would have also been interesting.

Also, one thing to consider is how to get the yoga ball to stay in the wall. If you want people bouncing off of it, it has to be very solid. There are half yoga ball devices used for balancing which could be good to look into.

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Reviewer 4:

The inspirational picture (on the top right) is great as a concept to imitate. I wonder if there may be more humorous characters with big belly's you could've tested - santa clause, peter griffin (family guy), homer simpson etc. Great job testing the size to make the model more immersive.

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Reviewer 5:

You picked an important thing to explore as not only are players interacting with this but this experience requires multiple models.

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Reviewer 6:

I think this whole game would be really fun and would love to play it myself. I would maybe be a bit concerned about safety though and how damaging it might be to the walls if people are capable of swinging and crashing into them.

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Feedback on the execution of the sketch model

Client 1:

I think your execution is great. It looks like it would work well.

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Client 2:

This is the example of an idea where the execution matters. And you executed it very well.

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Reviewer 3:

The execution of the looks like is very good. It conveys how the yoga ball would fit into the sheriff, and the sheriff itself has been thought through and built. The sheriff is also very recognizable.

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Reviewer 4:

The look of the sheriff is fantastic! Great job bringing a character to life, I think making it larger than life size was a smart idea. The only thing to improve would be to make the ball look a bit more like a belly - perhaps placing it a bit lower in the sherrifs stomach, or wrapping it a cloth material that same color as the shirt, so you don't actually see the exercise ball at all.

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Reviewer 5:

Great job on the looks like model. It gave a good sense of the look, size, and feel of the sheriffs.

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Reviewer 6:

I think making the sheriffs larger than human and very round really give it a cartoonish fun effect and I love it. The yoga ball was the perfect thing to use to show the effect you are going for. you might want to think about how you would indicate that someone has successfully hit the sheriff's belly?

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