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City Threads
By James Decker

Hamstrung? That might be the right word. You can feel that way trying to analyze what is a major development, what a minor trend, and what a forced attempt to capitalize on the hyper-hype of Internet based media. How to make sense of it? The revolution might not come charging all at once over the horizon. It might creep up from within. As entertainment news, hard news, and investment news join one another alongside product reviews, marketing features, and sports scandals, the entire experience begins to resemble well… nonlinear fiction as much as journalism. Now that's interesting. A lot of fiction writers are wondering how best to create non-linear narratives. And here the blurred boundary between news and entertainment may offer some insights. You can see it happening now at http://www.cnn.com. The most effective news anchor is mysterious, seemingly aware of facts that aren't getting reported as rumors and amateur video shine like pure news gold. For fiction writers, nonlinear narrative is less and less the vision of a single author and more the perception of real experience, reported, refigured, and brought to some emotional or intellectual purpose. Are "consumers" of fiction and news beginning to see themselves on equal footing with authors and news anchors? Find a juicy article on some backwaters Web site and it might qualify for a rewrite and re-mail to your personal network of friends. Your filter has to be a tight weave though, the real news like the real jokes come less often. A news anchor has no personality if he's just talking all the time. An author has no experience if she's writing all the time. Am I making this up, or are new standards for good, reliable, and effective media changing? I suppose it's subjective.

Anticipating these changes may leave us hamstrung, but enterprising folks will keep an eye on the possibilities. One student experiment in hypertext fiction is called City Threads. It turns an eye to the city of Seattle, Washington as the organizing element of a nonlinear story. The premise of City Threads is to explore the lives of three million people living in Seattle on a single day. Various writers, including you, can submit a story that intersects with the others, runs parallel to them, or actually resembles your own real life story . Yes, the premise is a little flat and there's no hope of getting to the three million character mark; but the notion of tweaking scale is the interesting concept here. There's nothing at City Threads to put the fear into AOL Time Warner just yet… unless it's the idea that daily news could be organized by some other means than headlines. City Threads organizes information in a couple of interesting ways that allow for comparisons and juxtapositions that topical categories couldn't allow. A child's perspective might surprise us nested as a hyperlink within a police officer's account. And the pleasure of reading crosswise through a range of stories is familiar to any who surf CNN. As events unfold, a single incident can serve as a pivot to multiple perspectives of that same incident, a passage or piece of dialogue serving as hyperlink to the same text in a different contexts. Similarly, objects and artifacts can produce an interesting response in readers. (for me anyway).

City Threads is an experiment and so it's allowed to fail. As it does, it becomes clear that much information distributed via the Web imitates the visual and verbal forms of print and broadcast media. To ignore the devices that do work as ways of making meaning in City Threads is to ignore natural curiosities of readers using new technologies. To ignore how news teaches its tricks to non-linear narrative and how fiction is beginning to show through the rhetoric of broadcast news is to deny that lately we are all hamstrung.