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By Jessica Norah Bowles-Martinez

Leisuretown.com is made by Tristan Farnon and presents his comic, made of three dimensional computer generated images, in the format of a screen fitting page-by-page. While nothing revolutionary was done in the presentation, I found the topics and the pictures themselves to be very interesting and not what I had seen before in print comics.

The comic follows its Weiner dog character from unemployed bum to QA engineer until the world falls apart. The hatred and contempt the character has for everyone sounds remarkably close to how I've felt at times and, more recently, what I've heard from some of my friends. I've not read comics beyond what is in the newspaper before so I am admittedly ignorant of what non-mainstream comics are like, but the text just seemed so specific to a certain group, those involved in software and technical jobs and the references and attacks so pointed that I felt that it was perhaps too narrow and with too many taboo topics to get far in print. A few especially bad (in the conservative sense) comics were when they were talking about why women aren't computer scientists and when they made repeated references to work place shootings. These are issues that many people are sensitive about and the author uses it as material for amusing but offensive subplots.

What is sort of surprising, is the detail to which Farnon went to create his characters and their world in computer graphics yet, despite his obvious computer skills, he did not create a way to exploit some of the features of being online. Instead we are given a static comic that could be in any other comic book, if it weren't for its topics and specific audience. The way it is now, it could just be seen as a risqué printed comic, for it does not lose anything if I had a good printer and printed out each page.

Leisuretown is mentioned in Reinventing Comics as one of the first online comic strips. I didn't see a date mentioned but it is possible that when the comic was made neither the technology nor the bandwidth would allow for making use of what is possible now for online comics.

It could be pretty interesting if there was a way to pan around the three-dimensional pictures that make up the comic, the art seems to lend itself to that sort of thing, or if perhaps there was a way to choose some of the narrative changes. With all the time and technical skill it seemed a shame that creativity was not applied to the overall presentation of the comic. While none of these possibilities are taken advantage of, I found myself reading all 90 of the comics and entertained, not because it brought something new or interactive, but because it was funny.