Date: Fri, 1 Jan 1999 13:25:45 -0500 From: "a bibliobibuli! beware, beware!" Subject: [WRITERS] EXERCISE: Was it a dream? a quick, short exercise... The situation is simple. One character has seen, heard, perhaps experienced something. It could be extraordinary (a dragon sat on my car! An angel talked to me! A devil made me an offer like nothing I had ever imagined! Or something really exciting that you come up with :-) or fairly ordinary (she kissed me! I forgot where I was going. The cat had four kittens.) The problem is simple. No one else believes them. No one else saw it. No one else heard it. There must be a rational explanation for what you thought happened. You must have been imagining things. Resolution? That's really up to you. Whether it is the somewhat sad acceptance that miracles could never happen to me (with a little twist? A sparkle of magic dust in the pocket of that jacket? Or just a twinkle in the eye of the dog that talked?) or the fun and romance of sharing a secret unknown to most of the world with a special friend who has also seen the Phoenix flying across the rainbow, heard the drumming of the trolls hiding in the subway mazes, or felt the touch of a goddess striding through the early morning stillness of a city park spreading blessings on all that she met... Or whether you have some other resolution (warning! This sentence is so far out of control that there is no going back and fixing it, so we'll just let it scurry off into the distance, unfinished and misshapen, a runaway leakage of words sprouting merrily across the screens of our days...) So -- a simple beginning with something happening. A middle full of complexity, confusion, frustration, disbelief. Making us really feel the conflict and the building tension between insisting on our own experience vs. going along with the accepted wisdom -- this is where the bulk of the story is, so don't hurry through it. And when the tension is at its highest, lead us into the resolution that you picked. Was it a dream? Only the author knows for sure... Write! "Take me up into your mind once or twice before I die (you know why: just because the eyes of you and me will be full of dirt some day). Quickly take me up into the bright child of your mind." Edward Estlin Cummings tink