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Coral Reefs and Hurricanes
Editing Homework

Your assignment is to edit an essay entitled Coral Reefs and Hurricanes. To get the essay, do the following:

  1. Click here. The essay will appear.
  2. Use your browser's File->Save As menu to copy the essay to a local directory.

Please edit the soft copy of the paper, relying on the same technique that I use to grade your essays. Make sure that you provide comments on the overall essay, in addition to your specific comments on words, sentences, and paragraphs. As usual, please e-mail me your completed work by the due date and time.

The "author" of this paper is an older colleague of yours who is writing a marine biology textbook for freshmen. The essay you are editing will serve as a one-page sidebar in this book. The author is sensitive to criticism, so be careful with your choice of words.