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Section 8.2.3

Elements in a Series

Use a comma to separate items in a series. Although placing a final comma before the coordinating conjunction is often considered optional, omitting it can sometimes cause confusion. Consequently, most scientific and technical writing routinely uses a final comma in a series to prevent possible ambiguities.


His intellectual acuity, diverse interests, frail physique, and ethereal personality made Oppenheimer a man of legendary proportions. [In this sentence, omitting the final comma would not cause confusion. Still, it is good practice in scientific and technical writing to always include the final comma in a series.]

Weak

Contemporary physics is still exploring neutron stars, black holes and the penetration of electrons through potential barriers. [The omission of the final comma before and causes ambiguity: are black holes and the penetration of electrons through potential barriers specific topics connected to the general subject of neutron stars, or are they separate items?]

Improved

Contemporary physics is still exploring neutron stars, black holes, and the penetration of electrons through potential barriers.


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