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Section 6.8.2

Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement

A pronoun must agree in gender and number with its antecedent. If necessary, vary your choice of pronouns to avoid sexist language. Sometimes the best way to avoid sexist language is to change the singular to the plural.


Unacceptable

In the United States, an astronaut candidate must be recommended by their previous organization.

Acceptable

In the United States, an astronaut candidate must be recommended by his previous organization.

Acceptable

In the United States, an astronaut candidate must be recommended by her previous organization.

Acceptable

In the United States, astronaut candidates must be recommended by their previous organizations.

--"Astronaut Selection and Training," Compton's Encyclopedia (modified)


When the antecedent is a singular indefinite pronoun, use a singular pronoun to refer to it. In such cases, vary your choice of pronouns to avoid sexist language. Sometimes the best way to avoid sexist language is to change the singular to the plural.


Unacceptable

Each of the astronaut candidates sent their photograph with their application.

Acceptable

Each of the astronaut candidates sent his photograph with his application.

Acceptable

Each of the astronaut candidates sent her photograph with her application.

Acceptable

All of the astronauts sent their photographs with their applications.


When the antecedent is a plural indefinite pronoun, use a plural pronoun to refer to it.


Unacceptable

Some of the astronaut candidates sent his photograph with his application.

Unacceptable

Some of the astronaut candidates sent her photograph with her application.

Acceptable

Some of the astronaut candidates sent their photographs with their applications.


Use a plural pronoun to refer to antecedents joined by the coordinating conjunction and.


Unacceptable

The ceramic tile and the aluminum alloy used in the experiment retained its initial hardness.

Acceptable

The ceramic tile and the aluminum alloy used in the experiment retained their initial hardness.


Use a pronoun that agrees in gender and number with the closest antecedent to refer to antecedents joined by the coordinating conjunctions or and nor.


Unacceptable

Either the disks or the motor need their parts repositioned.

Acceptable

Either the disks or the motor needs its parts repositioned.

Acceptable

Either the motor or the disks need their parts repositioned.


Use a singular pronoun to refer to antecedents preceded by each or every.


Unacceptable

Each ceramic tile and aluminum alloy sample used in the experiment retained their initial hardness.

Acceptable

Each ceramic tile and aluminum alloy sample used in the experiment retained its initial hardness.


Special case: If each follows a plural antecedent, use a plural pronoun.


Unacceptable

They each sent in his application. Tom and Jerry each sent in his application.

Acceptable

They each sent in their applications. Tom and Jerry each sent in their applications.


Use a singular pronoun to refer to a collective noun acting as a group.


Unacceptable

The astronaut selection committee submits their decision to NASA.

Acceptable

The astronaut selection committee submits its decision to NASA.


Use a plural pronoun to refer to the members of a collective noun acting as individuals.


Unacceptable

The astronaut selection committee vote for its favorite candidates.

Acceptable

The astronaut selection committee vote for their favorite candidates.

Acceptable

The members of the astronout selection committee vote for their favorite candidates.


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